Samstag, 1. November 2008

George´s marvelous medicne

I chose this book becouse the title was very interesting.
The bokk is from Roald Dahl and he is from wales.

George is a young who doesn´t like his grandma.
one day George meets his grandma and says:
"You must give the medicine." "Okay Mum", calls George.
George has a good idea to makes a new medicine and than he gives it grandma.
Also he search things and makes the mixture.
Grandma shoutet:
"Time for my medicine!"
George gives grandma a spoonful.
The mixture does fantastic things.
Grandma is very big an dad comes home and sees it.
He finds it very good.
Dad wants a new mixture and george makes it.
With the medicine they feed the animals and the are very big.
to the end grandma died.

I recomes the book becouse it is a very funny story.

written by Max Altendorfer

3 Kommentare:

Ernst Fischer hat gesagt…

Hax, it is good that you have put your story into the blog - but there still are some mistakes you should correct: 3rd person "s", recommend, some sentences do not really make sense - please correct that, ok?
ERF

Ernst Fischer hat gesagt…

sorry, I wanted to say MAX, of course, I do apologise!
ERF

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